The anatomy looks fine, her clothes look great too, so good job on that.

For her pose, if you compare it to the reference, Briza's shoulder is tilting towards the right, whereas Ultemecia's shoulders are even.

And maybe you can shorten the lines on her knee; pretty ladies don't need much definition on their legs.

But it looks really good nevertheless. I love how you drew her face. Now I'm excited to see it all colored.

Thank you! I tried to keep the drow culture in mind while designing her clothing, incorporating a lot of spiders and flowy cloth.

I didn't notice that the tilt of the shoulders had changed, thanks for pointing that out. Question is; did I balance the shoulders enough (i.e. tilting the other shoulder up as the other tilts down)?

Actually, I think it looks more realistic with defined knees :] so I think I will keep the lines in there.

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Tar det på allas vårt favoritspråk: Jag gillar fötterna. Har alltid varit helt värdelös på det, och du gjorde ett väldigt bra jobb. Annars är benen och kjolen skitfina de också.

Ansiktet och uttrycket gillar jag också riktigt mycket. Hur hon som ser ner på betraktaren.

det enda som är negativt är väl egentligen att den är lite stel. Annars ser högerarmen lite skum ut.

Hon ser väldigt maskulin ut, men jag tog för givet att det var med mening? I vilket fall som helst ser det riktigt bra ut. Bra jobbat!

Haha vi gör så
Glad att du gillar fötterna, för de var skitsvåra att få till, så var lite osäker.

Precis det ansiktsuttrycket jag var ute efter! Passar hennes personlighet. Och ja, hon är maskulin till personligheten också kan man säga, så det var med mening :]

Att bildne är stel är väl pga att det inte är någon action/rörelse-bild.. Måste träna på att göra sånna med så småningom.
Och du har rätt om armen, den är alldeles för lång :c Ska fixas!
Tack så mycket för kommentaren, den hjälpte ^^

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No problem~ Flowy cloth is always good.

Yes, you balanced the shoulders enough, but because of that, she may have to spread her legs out just a little, to keep balance.

But it's really very hard to notice, so maybe it doesn't need much revising.

I will consider moving her left foot a bit out, if it fits.
Other than that, the sketch is ready to be inked ^^

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I don't see any terribly off anatomy, just minor things you can change here and there to make it better. c:

Let's go from head to toe, with her hair, it might look better if you round off the back of her hair more. To make her scull look fuller instead of flat. And I'm assuming you're not going to ink what's covered up by her hair right? xD; (lol, seems like such a dumb question, but it's good to make sure) With her neck the way it is now, you might have to either redraw the head or the whole body because it looks like one or the other is twisted too much. BUT I think, (after drawing over your sketch to make sure) it will be fine if you reconnect her neck. Redraw the left-neck line so that it goes strait up instead of angling like that. This also gives her a much more slender neck which is good for females. ;D (lol) Ack, actually, you might have to fix her shoulders and arms, now that I'm looking at it her arms are proportionally longer then they should be...although I need to mention that some people just have longer arms. This is a little off topic, but next time you're designing characters, consider body type/shape and any special details this character may have. :d

Ok, back to this:
The only other things I think should be fixed would be the bumps on her arms. Uh, like her forearm, where there's more of a bulge at the part comming from the elbow. Same on the right (our right) arm.

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I made the hair a bit bigger and rounder in the coloured picture (which will soon be finished ), noticed that mistake myself.
But hmm.. Now that you say it.. maybe her neck looks a bit off too? I never noticed. it's too broad at the top and too slim at the bottom, no?
It's covered up by her hair, but if it wasn't; it would have looked very off I think XD

As for the arms; I've redrawn the (our) right one completely - the hand looked weird and the arm was too long. The other arm is probably a bit too long too, but it could be excused due the fact that she's leaning a bit forward to the left, which makes her left arm look bigger since it's closer to the viewer.

Don't understand what you mean with "bumps on arms" though :c ..you mean her wrists?

Thanks for the crit ^^

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Mmmm, yeah, sometimes it helps to redraw the skeleton over it on a seperate layer in digital form. Helps you pick out some mistakes sometimes. :3

Mmmmmm, the bumps on arms, haahah such a fail discription. xD;;; But I'm talking about how your forearm is thicker at the elbow and then slims down by the wrists. Yeah...that bump...<____<;;

Durr, no problem Xeix~ It was my pleasure. :3

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